After watching all variations, my gut instinct is that use of the original Shakespeare lines incorporated throughout the modernised diary, in the same garb/position/appearance, works best. It is ok seen just once but if there are at least two points where there is some Shakespeare then it hits the point home more solidly. It depends on how well it fits into the edited video.
I like it when it is incorporated in the video, and is in the same garb, because you sort of don't notice it, especially when the Shakespeare that is said works surprisingly well with the flow of modern talk!
The only other version I could see working is the original garb line stuck at the end of the footage, because it's like a little side note that is a bit awkward but because it's at the end, the point is still put across more.
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